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Survivors: Prologue~Ch. 1



 

Okay you're probably all freaked out, like "what's this!?" and stuff,

But I found out you can post stuff from Word. So I decided to test it out.

Basically, I wrote a story called Survivors.

But it's not about surviving in the wild and all that.. it's something different.

You'll see. Here is the Prologue and Chapter 1. Kinda freaky, eh?


 


 


 


  

 

Prologue


 

 

Tick… Tock… Tick… Tock…

The tense silence hung over the classroom, leaving an atmosphere of anxiety and awkwardness.

Tick… Tock.. Tick… tock…..

Mr. Hendrickson walked around his desk for the, perhaps, millionth time.

The small watch on his pale, skinny wrist ticked, tocked, so loudly, as if it was on speakerphones. The silence magnified the volume of the ticking.

All you could hear was the ticking, the furious pencil-scribbling noises, and the occasional flip of page.

Mr., Hendrickson looked up from his watch and scanned the room. He smiled. So far, so good.


 

 
    Beads of sweat were working their way down Robert's face. He breathed out. In. Out. In. Out. He counted to ten. That was what his therapist had told him to do, when he was nervous. No breakdown.

    His eyes scanned down the page. No way he was going to finish this Examination. And it was the first Examination. What would the second Examination be like? How many were there? How could he survive? Nobody knew what happened to you when you failed. He'd never seen anybody but the Passers come out.


 


 
    At first, Michael had rolled his eyes. The old paper and pencil method, eh? But then again, his arm would have major pain after the first Examination.

    He had nearly fallen out of the seat when he saw the packet. Was studying able to be competent to this? He had passed the Enrollment, so nobody here has memory chips. No cheating. Surely studying for years would pay off.


 


 

    Hendrickson smiled. He looked at his watch, and clapped his hands together, so loudly, half the room jumped out of their seats. A girl in the back began sobbing.

    "One minute. Finish up." He looked at his watch. He frowned.


 


 

    Nobody ever got the answers. They were "graded," and the Passers' names were just posted on the wall. The others, well, nobody knew, unless you were one of the Officials.

    Robert tried to imagine himself as an Official. He shuddered. Was it possible? Though… he had passed the first Enrollment.

    He looked up. Was this Hendrickson an Official? Probably not. They were strictly confidential, weren't they?

    He observed Hendrickson. He was looking at his watch. Old fashioned, designed just to tell time, and maybe an alarm included, by the thickness of it, he could tell. Suddenly, a flicker of anger, of his true self, flickered on his face for a moment. It scared Robert. He looked away. He could feel Hendrickson's eyes on him. He shuddered.


 


 

    He clasped his hands together, louder this time. Nearly everyone jumped out of their seat. Only a certain number of people did. He took note of those people.

    "Please leave your desks, walk out of the room, and go to room 342B. 342B. Leave immediately."

    His icy voice sent shivers and shudders all of the people's bodies. They left the room, the only sign of their presence represented by mere pencil marks.


 

 
It was unreasonably quiet in the room. A room, with an old fashioned doorknob. A stupid kid had stepped in front of it, stomped, yelled open, until someone muttered, idiot and opened the door.

Robert looked around. He was the only Chosen from the Hicklefinn School of Technological Education and Philosophical Sciences. H-STEPS. No, wait. His eyes paused on one kid, with a yellow shirt, green pants… familiar.

"Michael Jamison," he whispered, shuddering for the third time this day.


 


 

Michael's ears perked up. He heard that voice before. He vigorously scanned the room. He stopped when he saw a boy who seemed familiar. His glare was what reminded him most of that kid in H-STEPS… no. That was impossible. His parents had told him that he was the only special one in his school, the only Chosen, the only one with the chance to become an Official if he passed the Examinations. No. It was probably another kid from another school, who just looked like him, right?

But… he couldn't help it. He just knew it was him. Just knew. Should he talk to him? He didn't have any of his friends around right now, so might as well make some…but that was nearly impossible. He'd already given a bad impression upon him, hadn't he? Or was he as desperate as Michael?


 


 

Was it possible? He had to check. Last time, he was informed he was the only Chosen. Was this possible? Did the Michael kid have an identical twin brother who goes to a different school? Or was this some pure accident, was he not supposed to be here?

But they had that elaborate check and detailed Enrollment, even that laminated ID card that had the endlessly long code inscribed into the small software chip in the ID card, impossible to reproduce a copy and register another person.

The only conclusion was that they had lied to him. But why?


 


 


 


 

 

 
Chapter 1


 

Hendrickson came to the room a few hours later and broke the awkward silence that lingered for too long.

He wordlessly gave each person a cup of water and a small packet containing a small blue pill.

"'s this a SPill?" a kid asked.

Hendrickson smiled at the nickname and said, yes, it is, now take it; you'll need it.

Each kid took one SPill, and it confused Robert, why'd they need a SPill? Were they really going to not sleep for the rest of the Examination? Suddenly, as Hendrickson reached him, he hesitated. Was this really a SPill? What if… As if he had read his mind, Hendrickson glared at Robert and murmured to take it; it's really a SPill.

Robert shuddered at the icy, soft tone of Hendrickson, and it eerily reminded him of snakes.

He hurriedly took a cup and accidentally spilled it.

Hendrickson's eyes flashed a deep anger, so inhuman Robert backed away in surprise and fell to the ground next to where Michael was.

Suddenly, Hendrickson smiled, his usual "bored" face on display, his lips pursed, as he muttered, "come with me."


 

They walked along long, snaky hallways, the walls a dull gray with random splotches of red, which honestly freaked Robert out. He nervously glanced at the back of Hendrickson's pitch black hair, and it felt like looking at a sleeping lion.

Each step, each new hallway they turned to, it felt longer, and longer than ever, like an hour, another hour, another hour passed.

Each hour, his mood felt sourer and sourer, and he began to wonder where he really was going.

"Where are we going?"

Suddenly, Hendrickson stopped at the nearby door and opened it. "In."

Inside was a small dorm. With a few beds and a door that Robert naturally thought of as the bathroom.

"Go into the bathroom, change into these."

"Why?"

"Just-" his eyes flashed red "-go. Hurry. I'll force you into them if you don't." His threatening voice urged him into the bathroom as he blindly grabbed whatever clothes Hendrickson had given to him.

He wished it looked the same as the ones he was wearing right now.

His hands suddenly felt warm, as if the clothes he was holding was changing shape. He blindly searched for the light switch as he closed the door shut.

There was no lock.

"Oh, well…" he muttered.

He noticed the clothes were the same duplicate as his clothes, just as he wished. "Cool."


 


 

The suspect opened the door. Good, Hendrickson thought, he doesn't look any different.

"Wash your hands," Hendrickson snapped. He'd learned a while back that talking nicely never worked. "And wash your face."

The kid backed away into the door, looking small and afraid. "Kids…" he muttered.


 


 

Michael was worried. Of course, not of the kid; just that, what happens if he made a mistake like the other kid, Robert? He knew it was Robert, the minute he had hesitated. Robert was the careful one, making practical decisions, smart and all. He was brave and kind, one of the reasons why he had more friends than Michael.

But he wouldn't make such rash mistakes like Robert. Of course not. He'd never dare to make a mistake. Anyhow, he had a sick feeling in his stomach that maybe, Robert wasn't going to return for the rest of the Examination.

It surprised him especially, therefore, when Robert walked in. But he looked different. He didn't have that calm, peaceful, knowing face he'd always put on in H-STEPS. He looked a bit surprised, taken aback, maybe, and definitely confused. When Hendrickson gestured towards the direction of Michael, Robert obediently went to where Hendrickson was pointing.

Next to me, Michael realized.


 

He had to tell someone. Of course, Hendrickson could probably read minds, so he had kept his face as confused as possible, farthest away from horror as possible, trying so hard not to think of what he had seen. Hendrickson was smiling when Robert had walked out of the bathroom, as if he knew. But that was impossible. He wasn't an Official, was he? Of course not. Impossible. But…

"Hey."

"What?" Michael snapped.

"Whoa, calm down, man. Look. There's people staring at us," Robert whispered. "Hey people, stop staring at me. Nothing happened to me, just go talk to your friends or whatever."

The whole room seemed to let go of the tension it had held for over an hour or two.

"What?" Michael repeated.

"Look, man, don't you go to H-STEPS?"

"Yeah, you, too, right? You're Robert Anderson, right?"

"Yeah, how'd you know?"

"You know, you're so famous…" he gritted his teeth.

"Look, sorry man, if it makes you sad. I didn't mean to um, get you mad that time. It's okay... You're Michael Jamison, right? I'm sorry."

"Yeah, it's okay, I guess. Just sort of, never mind. So, what were you gonna say?"

Robert looked around as if he was going to tell Michael something so secretive, so important, that nobody else could hear.

"Okay," he whispered. "How long have I been gone?"

"Um, like ten fifteen minutes, why?"

"Oh, okay." He glanced up at the ceiling and slapped his cheeks some.

"What?" Michael looked annoyed.

"We walked for like –"

"Wait, you and who? Hendrickson?"

"Yeah, me and Hendrickson, we walked for a long time, for an hour, it seemed, but I guess like five minutes…"

"And?"

"The hallways were so long, almost evil, and it made me feel strange. It felt like hours until I asked where were going, and suddenly he just opened like a random door and told me to go in.

"And so I went in, and like, it's all dark –"

"Why you telling me this?"

"Just –wait. So I went in, and it's like all dark, and I could see it's a dorm. With like bunk beds and a bathroom, and he tells me to go into the bathroom and change into new clothes."

"Wait, you're wearing the same thing!"

"Yeah, so as I'm going in, I haven't seen the clothes yet, and I think, 'gee, I wish these clothes looked like the ones I'm wearing right now, so nobody, you know…' and my hands get all warm and the clothes feel… different. So when I turn on the lights –"

"They look exactly like yours?"

"Yeah. So I'm like, 'weird…' And when I walk out, Hendrickson like yells at me to go back in and wash my face and hands. So I walk back in, and I look at the sink, and when I wash my hands, the soap, man, it hurts! And the soap made red bubbles. Is that possible? Like my blood! But I didn't have any cuts. And when I washed my hands with water, it hurt bad. Like seriously. So when I wash my face, I'm all scared, so I go to the shower to see if there's any other kind of soap. You know, a bathtub? So I open the curtains and I see–"

Robert stopped. Suddenly, his head hurt, his head hurt bad. Like it was bleeding, a lot. Like he was dying, as if suddenly, he had been shot in the head. His head hurt, and he lay down, fainted.

"Robert!" Michael screamed in terror. Blood was dripping from his hands, clutched on his face.


 


 

From VRoom, Hendrickson smiled. "No suspicion… no suspicion…" He laid back in his seat and rested his feet above the controls. "No suspicion…"

He eyed the screaming kid leaning over the suspect. "Michael Jamison," he read the ID screen, smiling. "Michael Jamison."


 


 


 


 

(anyone who wants the original updated Word Document please contact me at countdown4books@gmail.com or celinerulez@gmail.com. Thank you)

Trackers By Patrick Carman

It´s one of those books that just are different from the rest, that tells you you should read it.

Technically it was the cover and genre that made me borrow the book in such a hurry, but once I opened it, I knew this was different from any other book I read.

First of all, it was written in a different format. What should I say, play format? 
This man is questioning this kid named Adam about this, what seems, tragedy that happened, and they keep saying 'suspect,' which leads to the conclusion that maybe there might be something wrong with what happened, and they suspect that Adam did all of this, and he keeps asking to see his friends...

When Adam tells the story, He tells it like first-person-point of view, and there are certain scenes where you have to go to the back of the book to the appendix to read the scenes...

he keeps saying something got him into this mess, and a bunch of stuff...
and this tells me that this is happening in the near future, because there aren't any flying cars, but with the videos and apple companies, and the ingeniousness of Adam, it has to be the future, but not too distant.

It is very addicting, reading the Trackers book.
The trackers, well, they track people.

In this case, this mysterious Zara and Lasko seem to be bothering them in the fact that they have stolen Adam's most precious inventions and blueprints from file, hacked it, more specifically, and threatens to post his ingeniousness-filled-inventions such as the belinski or whatnot on the internet for all to see, only if he doesn't unlock the Raymond Chip.

The Raymond Chip is a dangerous piece of technology, a small computer chip that is the "back door to the Internet." Meaning, if you're genius enough to unlock, decode the complications of it, you can pretty much get to every single website in this world, as in actually hacking every Internet-based material in existence, INCLUDING banks.
When he is threatened to decode the Raymond Chip, and learns this computer myth wasn't a myth, but actually true, he just knows he has to decode it, for the sake of his inventions and his life. Because this tough Lasko doesn't seem like he's joking when he's all mean at the screen when they talk.

He decodes it, but in the while, he and his friends, called the Trackers (Emily, Finn, Lewis, and Adam), try to find and Track Zara and Lasko, and why they have threatened them to do this in the first place.
They find Zara, and...
READ THE REST FOR YOURSELF.
GO TO the Trackers Website to see for real what this is about.

Uglies Movie... coming 2011!

For all of those who haven't known, they're making a movie on the Uglies book! By Scott Westerfeld.
One of the best SF books I've ever read. You've gotta read it, then wait for it to come out!! (in 2011 i think... :( )

Just saying! Go to www.scottwesterfeld.com/blog/ to see what's going on for the latest news.

Really good, I thought they should've made a movie on that,
and they better make it good! :)

for more info, Google "uglies movie" and you'll find a load of stuff!